Writing task 2 , kindly evaluate.

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adamali asked 1 month ago

kindly evaluate task 2 with possible score
Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
Transportation is an essential component of any country infrastructure. Although various ways of transport, many people argue that governments should increase the expenditure on railways more than roads. In my opinion, I believe that railways and roads should have some care from the governments. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for that and share some examples.
Most of the people who think that more money should be spent on railways are arguing that railways are the best way to travel for many reasons. Firstly, it is a safe mode of travel. Take European trains for example. They have the lowest percentage of accidents through last decade. Secondly, it is more convenient for long distance travel, as the traveller can explore the internet during his journey or even he can have rest and sleep. Furthermore, proponents of this point of view claim that the more developed railways in the country, the less crowded roads, due to more people will tend to use railways. For these causes, it is clear that railway is an important method of transport.
However, this does not mean that roads have less importance than railways. It is now a marker of a country modernization is to have highly constructed roads to accommodate other means of transport. For instance, in my hometown, we have a huge network of railways but our roads are still underdeveloped which makes tourists mobility between historical regions very difficult. Thus, it is evident that governments should not neglect roads.
To sum up, a railway is one of the best ways of transport for many reasons. Yet governments should spend equally on both railways and roads to achieve comfort in travel. I hope this improvement can be done easily.

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adamali replied 1 month ago

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Nam Phuong answered 1 month ago

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
Transportation is an essential component of any country infrastructure. Although (Despite) various ways of transport, many people argue that governments should increase the expenditure on railways more than roads. In my opinion, I believe that railways and roads should have some care (==>suitable consideration) from the governments. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for that and share some examples.
Most of the people who think that more money should be spent on railways are arguing that railways are the best way to travel for many reasons. Firstly, it is a safe mode of travel. Take European trains for example. They have the lowest percentage (==>risk) of accidents through last decade. Secondly, it is more convenient for long distance travel, as the traveller (traveler) can explore (surf) the internet during his journey or even he can have rest and sleep. Furthermore, proponents of this point of view claim that the more developed railways in the country, the less crowded roads, due to more people will tend to use railways. For these causes, it is clear that railway is an important method of transport.
However, this does not mean that roads have less importance than railways. It is now a marker of a country modernization is to have highly constructed roads to accommodate other means of transport. For instance, in my hometown, we have a huge network of railways but our roads are still underdeveloped which makes tourists mobility between historical regions very difficult. Thus, it is evident that governments should not neglect roads.
To sum up, a railway is one of the best ways of transport for many reasons. Yet governments should spend equally on both railways and roads to achieve comfort in travel. I hope this improvement can be done easily.

T.A: 8.0

  • sufficiently address all parts of the task

C.C: 8.0

  • sequences information and ideas logically

L.R: 7.5

  • use a sufficient range of vocabulary

G.A: 8.0

  • good grammar usage
  • minor errors

Overall: 8.0

Great job! Keep it up, buddy!

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adamali replied 1 month ago

Thanks for your support

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