Whether some one achieves their goal is not a question of luck. To what extent do you agree?

QuestionsCategory: OpinionWhether some one achieves their goal is not a question of luck. To what extent do you agree?
dhanyapeter asked 1 year ago

It is commonly seen that people attribute success to luck. While some believe that people can achieve success in their lives if they are lucky; however, some feel that goals cannot be fulfilled by luck . Here, in this essay I completely agree that success is the positive outcome of hard work and perspiration and luck do not have any role.
           Admittedly, no famous people has ever achieved their aims with out putting immense efforts on finishing their tasks. It is easily understood by reading their biographies rather than considering luck have helped them to achieve successes.Take Helen keller as an example, even though Ms keller was blind and deaf, she fought against all physical odds and succeeded to establish a new communication for the blind , the braille system. Therefore , If people are intended to achieve anything in this world, no one can stop them from having that.
           Nevertheless, success is a difficult term to describe and its’ meaning differs for various people. While considering celebrities as examples, it would be difficult for the public to understand whether they had achieved success by hard work or not. Precisely, children of film actors can get more chances at film industry than any other talented person who is not connected to the industry by birth.Hence, in such cases people believe that it is due to their luck they have become celebrities.However, this would not happen all the cases.Even though their connections might have helped them for an entry in such fields, it would be very difficult for them to be leading actors if they were not talented enough.
                         In conclusion, while considering both points of view in detail, I opine that, nothing in this world can make people successful, unless they willing to become determined and industrious personalities. Though they have relationships with famous personalities, it would not ensure their success in any fields, particularly in this competitive world.

Whether some one achieves their goal is not a question of luck. To what extent do you agree?
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Rachel Evans answered 1 year ago

It is commonly seen that people attribute success to luck. While some believe that people can achieve success in their lives if they are lucky; however, some feel that goals cannot be fulfilled by luck. (coherence in these 2 sentences are not very well) Here, in this essay I completely agree that success is the positive outcome of hard work and perspiration and luck do not have any role.
Admittedly, no famous people has have ever achieved their aims/ (goals) with out without putting immense efforts on finishing their tasks. It is easily understood by reading their biographies rather than considering luck have helped them to achieve successes. Take Helen Keller as an example, even though Ms Keller was blind and deaf, she fought against all physical odds and succeeded to (word choice – phrasal verb) establish a new [means of] communication for the blind , the Braille system. Therefore, if people are intended to achieve anything in this world, no one can stop them from having that.
Nevertheless, success is a difficult term to describe and its meaning differs for various people. While considering celebrities as examples, it would be difficult for the public to understand whether they had achieved success by hard work or not. Precisely, children of film actors can get more chances at film industry than any other talented person who is not connected to the industry by birth. Hence, in such cases people believe that it is due to their luck they have become celebrities. However, this would not happen all the cases. Even though their connections might have helped them for an entry in such fields, it would be very difficult for them to be leading actors if they were not talented enough.
In conclusion, while considering both points of view in detail, I opine that, nothing in this world can make people successful, unless they willing to become determined and industrious personalities. (way of expression) Though they have relationships with famous personalities, it would not ensure their success in any fields, particularly in this competitive world.

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Whether some one achieves their goal is not a question of luck. To what extent do you agree?
5 (100%) 1 vote

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