Topic: Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

QuestionsCategory: Advantage/DisadvantageTopic: Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
livermore asked 2 years ago

Topic: Some young children  spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the  advantages and disadvantages of this.
The issue concerning young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports is  quite controversial and sensitive due to numerous advantages and disadvantages. I reckon that benefits in this discussion prevail upon the drawbacks owing to the following reasons.
First and foremost, children nowadays are more stronger than last young generation who survived in previous century since present young people take up regularly with sport, as a result healthy condition improve their organism in particular, muscular development and height growth. Therefore they rarely be ill with serious disease like obesity, arthritis and so on. In addition to this, do sport exercise expend possibility of person especially activity of brain. Namely physical exercise can refresh children’s mind in outcome young people do not run into some difficulties to do mental exercise after physical training.Furthermore, sport help children to make full use of their time. By spending most of time on sport, children may not find time to do  other bad customs and activities such as smoking, drink alcoholic beverages which will ruin their future.
On the other hand, sport have minor drawbacks to their life. Initially, most children practicing sports without stopping in consequence they may neglect study and sport may affect  their family’s bond. Undoubtedly, young people may excel in sports but not study, even though they really want to do homework but exhausted body may not allow them to do so. These situation brings on passive academic performances. Another negative side that certain children after finished to learn sport, they want to examine own strength on burglary work or fight with strangers. In other words day by day young people may be real delinquent if they carry on  to do above bad works. Last but not least, essence of injury is horrible sense in sport. If we glance at history of sport, it clearly indicate that  majority sportsmen forced to leave sport due to worst injury. In this case if this situation occurs with young people, they may loose self-confidence since it difficult to find adequate power to proceed to doing exercise after heavy injury.
By way of conclusion, sport is one of the best way to develop children’s health and it brings them good opportunity to create future life but at the same time children should not overdo sport exercise because it may encumbers to their studies and relationships with others.

Topic: Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
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Rachel Evans answered 2 years ago

Topic: Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
The issue concerning young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports is quite controversial and sensitive due to numerous advantages and disadvantages. I reckon that benefits in this discussion prevail upon over the drawbacks owing to the following reasons.
First and foremost, children nowadays are more stronger than last young generation who survived in previous century since present young people take up regularly with sport, as a result healthy condition improve their organism in particular, muscular development and height growth. Therefore they rarely be are ill with serious disease like obesity, arthritis and so on. In addition to this, do sport exercise expend (word choice) possibility of person especially activity of brain. Namely physical exercise can refresh children’s mind in outcome young people do not run into some difficulties to do doing mental exercise after physical training. Furthermore, sport helps children to make full use of their time. By spending most of time on sport, children may not find time to do other bad customs and activities such as smoking, drink alcoholic beverages which will ruin their future.
On the other hand, sport have has minor drawbacks to their life. Initially, most children practicing sports without stopping in consequence they may neglect study and sport may affect their family’s bond. Undoubtedly, young people may excel in sports but not study, even though they really want to do homework but exhausted body may not allow them to do so. These This situation brings on passive academic performances. Another negative side is that certain children after finished to learn sport, they want to examine their own strength on burglary work or fight with strangers. In other words day by day young people may be real delinquent if they carry on to do doing above bad works. Last but not least, essence of injury is horrible sense in sport. If we glance at history of sport, it clearly indicates that majority sportsmen were forced to leave sport due to worst injury. In this case if this situation occurs with young people, they may loose self-confidence since it difficult to find adequate power to proceed to doing exercise after heavy injury.
By way of conclusion, sport is one of the best way to develop children’s health and it brings them good opportunity to create future life but at the same time children should not overdo sport exercise because it may encumbers to their studies and relationships with others.
TA – 5.5

  • address all parts of the task with weak reasoning and development

CC – 5.5

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LR – 5.0

  • errors in word choice, collocation
  • use limited range of vocabulary

GRA – 5.0

  • basic grammatical errors (should pay more attention to s-v agreement, singular/ plural)
  • punctuation may be faulty

 Overall 5.0

Topic: Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
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