Topic: Nowadays more and more children acquire unhealthy eating habits. Why is it happening? What can be done to solve this issue?

QuestionsTopic: Nowadays more and more children acquire unhealthy eating habits. Why is it happening? What can be done to solve this issue?
Ali Zufarov asked 3 years ago

In recent times, a new type of foods has entirely surrounded us. However, those are all influencing on individuals’ healthy norms negatively and some scholars reckon as a societal problem that is now acknowledged by most citizens across the globe. In this case, proactive solutions should be put forward by the parents and authorities to suppress this arising complication amid offspring before they develop a passion for detrimental consuming habits. Let us consider the main issue, and then outline possible remedies.
 
Perhaps the pressing matter is prevailing junk foods like hamburger, pizza, sandwich, french fries as well as hot dogs which can be stumbled upon by eaters every corner of the municipal area effortlessly. It is due to the fact that the cost of such cooking is not high-priced and everybody can afford it. Furthermore, despite the factor that fast foods lead to gaining poor diet, generally, these are an extremely appetizing and delicious that is why these foods are ubiquitous. Turning to possible solutions, one possible quick fix could be that officials should drastically put up taxes concerning unhealthy meals. By doing this, the rate of bad eating habits can progressively be declined among juveniles.
 
The genesis of the issue is actually family background. There are a plethora of kinsfolk who are undergoing poorness and they have to carry out work to provide their children. Generally, these families are dual-career, meaning that both father and mother have a full-time job. And in this case, careless offspring need to buy harmful snacks, resulting in increase and addict to unhealthy devouring habits. In order to resolve the above-mentioned matter, parents should consider hiring a domestic help to take care of cooking and instruct their children to refuse unhealthy consuming norms.
 
To sum up, the risks posed by wide spreading junk foods and the family background are connected to detrimental eating habits. Possible answers might be formulated legislation on increasing taxes by authority figures and supplied with a wet-nurse by couples.

1 Answers
Nam Phuong answered 3 years ago

In recent times, a new type of foods has entirely surrounded us. However, those (they) are all influencing on individuals’ healthy norms (health) negatively and some scholars reckon(them) as a societal (social) problem that is now acknowledged by most citizens across the globe. In this case, proactive solutions should be put forward by the parents and authorities to suppress this arising complication amid offspring (among children) before they develop a passion for detrimental consuming habits. Let us consider the main issue, and then outline possible remedies.

Perhaps the pressing matter is prevailing junk foods like hamburger, pizza, sandwich, french fries as well as hot dogs which can be stumbled upon by eaters every corner of the municipal area effortlessly. It is due to the fact that the cost of such cooking is not high-priced (high) and everybody can afford it. Furthermore, despite the factor that fast foods lead to gaining (increasing) poor diet, generally, these are an extremely appetizing and delicious (taste) that is why these foods are ubiquitous. Turning to possible solutions, one possible quick fix could be that officials should drastically put up (enforce higher) taxes concerning unhealthy meals. By doing this, the rate of bad eating habits can progressively be declined among juveniles.

The genesis of the issue is actually family background. There are a plethora of kinsfolk who are undergoing poorness (poverty) and they have to carry out work to provide (raise) their children. Generally, these families are dual-career, meaning that both father and mother have a full-time job. And in this case, careless offspring need to buy harmful snacks, resulting in increase and addict (being addicted) to unhealthy devouring habits. In order to resolve the above-mentioned matter, parents should consider hiring a domestic help (house maid) to take care of cooking and instruct their children to refuse unhealthy consuming norms (habit/ custom).

To sum up, the risks posed by wide spreading junk foods and the family background are connected to detrimental eating habits. Possible answers might be formulated (formulating) legislation on increasing taxes by authority figures and supplied (providing) with a wet-nurse by couples.

L.R: 8.0

  • sufficiently address all parts of the task

C.C: 7.5

  • logically arrange ideas and information
  • clear progression throughout the paragraph

L.R: 7.5

  • wide range of vocabulary. however, using too many academic words makes your paragraph confusing.

G.A: 7.5

  • some grammatical mistakes

Overall: 7.5

Good job!

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