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Nowaday it seems unreasnable to have a single job for the entire work life. Older generetions stopped their education and then they started to work. Instead today education is a permanent aspect of our lives. The current situation is this and workers have to become used to that.
Take for example an employer: according to me, stay all the career behaind the same desk will make you crazy. It is foundamental get new motivationa every day to perform a good job. Today that is easy to do: science and technology advance day by day, so the workers of every sector have to face this innovation with positive spirit. Even if this seems a sentence, it is a bless: the necessity of improove our education will make us to get a focus on aurselves and our priority. In my opinion we would focus on what we really like because we are forced to change during oure lives and so we will not waste our time in something we do not like.
There is a negative aspect in this: the opportunity to change our career or to improove our education is not guaranted to anymore. Someone might not be in economical condition to follow this path and then the risk is an increase of unemployment. In this case the solution to the problem would come from the governaments and then become foundamental the realization of a welfare-state.
Finaly, the current condition of having several careers is a positive aspect of our society, only if the possibility of get a new job is guaranted to every citizen with a welfare-state.