Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 2Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Kevin.C asked 2 years ago

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It’s been controversial that increasing a number of facility for citizen to prevent illness than spend on the medicine to heal people from illness. However, a healthy lifestyle is the one which was got more attention from citizens, and I believe that a healthy lifestyle has a positive influence on self-immunity. The government spending a massive of money to support medicine industry for development which provided the virus to getting sprite that could effected in health people. It’s gained a large processed for improve the medicine which offered a proficiency way for the treatment, for that expand the average of human aged. For example, some of the virus can’t be healed in previous time and people might death during the illness, but in term of a virus of vaccine was came up saving people who are really sick from death. On the other hand, a healthy lifestyle is more important for against illness. Some of the illness cause from the diet and lack of regular basis. The fast food might cause the cardiovascular disease, high blood pressure, and that is not a good way to extent age of life. To sump this up, government could spend a large proportion consideration into disseminated the knowledge about healthy lifestyle, although treatment for the people might more efficiency to get recover.

Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Rachel Evans answered 2 years ago

It’s It has been controversial that increasing a number of facility for citizen to prevent illness than spend on the medicine to heal people from illness. (incomplete sentence) However, a healthy lifestyle is the one which was got more attention from citizens, and I believe that a healthy lifestyle has a positive influence on self-immunity. The government spending a massive amount of money to support on supporting medicine industry for development which provided the virus to getting sprite (?!) that could effected affect in health people human’s health. It’s  It has gained a large processed for improve the medicine which offered a proficiency way for the treatment, for that expand the average of human aged. For example, some of the virus can’t be healed in previous time and people might death during the illness, but in term of a virus of vaccine was came up saving people who are really sick from death. On the other hand, a healthy lifestyle is more important for against illness. Some of the illness cause from the diet and lack of regular basis. The fast food might cause the cardiovascular disease, high blood pressure, and that is not a good way to extent age of life. To sump this up, government could spend a large proportion consideration into disseminated the knowledge about healthy lifestyle, although treatment for the people might more efficiency to get recover.
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Task achievement – 4.0

  • response to the task only in a minimal way
  • main ideas are difficult to identify
  • under word

Coherence and cohesion – 3.5

  • not write in paragraph
  • connection amongst sentences is very loose

Lexical resource – 4.0

  • use only basic vocabulary
  • make many errors in word choice, articles, word form…

Grammatical range and accuracy – 3.5

  • use very limited range of structures
  • errors may distort the meaning of sentences

Overall 3.5

Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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