Some people say that a person’s success depends on his/her upbringing by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 2Some people say that a person’s success depends on his/her upbringing by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Arora asked 2 years ago

Some people believe that persons success depends on his/her upbringing by parents. Do you agree or disagree .
It is undeniable the fact that every individual can become successful person due to hardwork. But some people say it is totally depended on blight of person by his/ her parents. In my opinion, I do not believe so because there are plethora of examples available in the word which has been proved this incorrect.
First of all, veterans always say that ‘Hardwork is key to success` in this case people whom are involved in competitions and want to achieve success in their lives , can fulfill their dreams through hardwork as well as it is not interlinked with upbringing by parents. For instance , Kapil sharma is eminent comedian in the entire world and also successful person, if we compare his present life with his past he spent his childhood in poverty because his parents were not affluent so that he could not be completed his academics, but his goals were higher in early years and he had been laboured a lot for his expectations. Consequently, now he is popular character of Bollywood and Hollywood movies.
Secondly, enthusiasm is second major factor which is not interlinked with upbringing by parents. People who struggle in their lives in order to get victory and want to earn name and fame in communities, they ought to passionate about their goals which is targeted by them, it can be observed that they face obstacles but one day they will be won battlefield and become the man of the world.
In conclusion , it is quite obvious that hardwork and the  felling of enthusiasm about their goal are the major compents which might be proved helpfull to success whereas, such have not any connection with abide by parents.

Some people say that a person’s success depends on his/her upbringing by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
5 (100%) 1 vote

1 Answers
Rachel Evans answered 2 years ago

It is undeniable (the fact) that every individual can become successful person due to hardwork. But some people say it is totally depended on blight of person (meaning?!) by his/ her parents. In my opinion, I do not believe so; because there are is a plethora of examples available in the word which has been proved have proved this incorrect. (S-V agreement)
First of all, veterans always say that ‘hardworking is key to success’, in this case, people whom are involved in competitions and want to achieve success in their lives, can fulfill their dreams through hardwork as well as it is not interlinked with upbringing by parents. For instance, Kapil Sharma is an eminent comedian in the entire world and also a successful person, if we compare his present life with his past he spent his childhood in poverty because his parents were not affluent so that he could not be completed his academics, but his goals were higher in early years and he had been laboured a lot for his expectations. Consequently, now he is a popular character of Bollywood and Hollywood movies.
Secondly, enthusiasm is the second major factor which is not interlinked with upbringing by parents. People who struggle in their lives in order to get victory and want to earn name and fame in communities, they ought to be passionate about their goals (which is are targeted by them), it can be observed that they face obstacles, but one day they will be won win battlefield and become the man of the world.
In conclusion , it is quite obvious that hardwork and the felling of enthusiasm about their goal are the major components which might be proved helpfull to success whereas, such have not any connection with abide by parents.
Hi, Arora
First of all, I’m terribly sorry for this late respond. And here are your feedbacks:
You are using too long sentences without proper use of punctuation and suitable conjunctions, relative pronouns, etc. , and it’s very hard to understand the messages you want to deliver.
Overall 4.5
Task achievement – 4.5

  • address the task only partially
  • the development is not always clear
  • supporting ideas may not suitable

Coherence and Cohesion – 4.5

  • use some basic cohesive devices but may be inaccurate
  • the response’s flow is hard to follow

Lexical resource – 5.5

  • attempt to use less common lexical items
  • may make some errors in spelling, word form

Grammatical range and accuracy – 4.5

  • use complex structures
  • make grammatical errors which cause difficulty for the readers

Some people say that a person’s success depends on his/her upbringing by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
5 (100%) 1 vote

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