process of making water clock, task 1. Could you also check it please?

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great asked 1 year ago

The chart provided illustrates the procedure by which a water clock can be made.

Overall, the process includes such objects and materials as a tap, a plastic bottle, a stand, another plastic bottle with its neck cut off, a straw and glue. It is also obvious that water can be used for manual timing and it involves seven stages that can be repeated again.

Making of a clock manually with the help of water begins when the tap is turned on and the water is let drop into the first bottle fitted above the stand with the help of a tape. In the next stage the hole made at the bottom of the bottle should be covered to stop water from leaking and allowing the bottle to fill to overflow through a straw glued at the upper side of the bottle. The next stage is to wait until the level becomes constant and subsequently the finger is taken away from the hole to let water drop. Afterwards, it is necessary to count and mark levels per minute so that the marks can be used again. Finally, the bottom bottle is emptied and the process can be used to measure the time over and over again.

process of making water clock, task 1. Could you also check it please?
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great replied 1 year ago

Thanks a lot dear. I didn’t think it would have so many mistakes, I got you, I’d better read more samples.

great replied 1 year ago

I appreciate your effort and time dear. Is there anything I can do to make this website better. By the way, you are free to use my samples (if they are suitable of course) to help other learners too. ๐Ÿ™‚

bee replied 1 year ago

Dear Friend, I am just a candidate and nowadays I m preparing for Ielts exam ( I am not an administrator of this website)… I just show people their mistakes , which I could identify.. And I should admit , that I am not a professional essay checker)))
BY checking works I ,first, improve my own skills, and,second, help people ๐Ÿ™‚
I do not know why, but it is pleasant when someone believe me and thank
So, thank you for your trust , I will help you as I can )

great replied 1 year ago

That’s no problem, I also appreciate people who take their time to help people who they have never seen. Actually I thought you were one of the website moderators who check and assess essays like in many other websites. That is no problem.
As for me, I have already taken IELTS and got 8, but my writin was 7 so I am going to improve my band score. I would like your email to contact if possible. Mine is [email protected]. Good luck

great replied 1 year ago

What skill do you worry about most? Is it writing or reading?

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bee answered 1 year ago
  • The providedย chart (provided) illustrates the procedure by which a water clock can be made. Overall, the process includes such objects and materials as a tap, a plastic bottle, a stand, another plastic bottle with its neck cut off, a straw and glue( process can not include materials!!! Materials may be needed, but I do not think that here you should count what will be need ). It is also obvious that water can be used for manual timing and it(?)(may be_ process involves ….)ย involves seven stages that can be repeated again(It is not so neccessary). Making of a clock manually with the help of water begins when the tap is turned on and the water is let drop into the first bottle fitted above the stand with the help of a tape. In the next stage the hole made at the bottom of the bottle should be covered to stop water from leaking and allowing the bottle to fill to overflow through a straw glued at the upper side of the bottle. The next stage is to wait until the level becomes constant and subsequently the finger is taken away from the hole to let water drop. Afterwards, it is necessary to count and mark levels per minute so that the marks can be used again. Finally, the bottom bottle is emptied and the process can be used to measure the time over and over again.

 
P.S. : Unfortunately, I should mention that essay is poor …
I will not put a mark. I recommend you to read as many band 7+samples for process diagram as possible . Observe them properly and try to escape your mistakes … Good luck

process of making water clock, task 1. Could you also check it please?
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great replied 1 year ago

Thanks a lot dear. I didn’t think it would have so many mistakes, I got you, I’d better read more samples.

great replied 1 year ago

I appreciate your effort and time dear. Is there anything I can do to make this website better. By the way, you are free to use my samples (if they are suitable of course) to help other learners too. ๐Ÿ™‚

bee replied 1 year ago

Dear Friend, I am just a candidate and nowadays I m preparing for Ielts exam ( I am not an administrator of this website)… I just show people their mistakes , which I could identify.. And I should admit , that I am not a professional essay checker)))
BY checking works I ,first, improve my own skills, and,second, help people ๐Ÿ™‚
I do not know why, but it is pleasant when someone believe me and thank
So, thank you for your trust , I will help you as I can )

great replied 1 year ago

That’s no problem, I also appreciate people who take their time to help people who they have never seen. Actually I thought you were one of the website moderators who check and assess essays like in many other websites. That is no problem.
As for me, I have already taken IELTS and got 8, but my writin was 7 so I am going to improve my band score. I would like your email to contact if possible. Mine is [email protected]. Good luck

great replied 1 year ago

What skill do you worry about most? Is it writing or reading?

bee answered 1 year ago

band 8 is a great result!!! I can say that it is my main goal !:) ( I take an Ielts for the 1 time and I am worrying about it)
I hope that You can do your best and achieve your target!

process of making water clock, task 1. Could you also check it please?
Rate this post

great replied 1 year ago

Thanks a lot dear. I didn’t think it would have so many mistakes, I got you, I’d better read more samples.

great replied 1 year ago

I appreciate your effort and time dear. Is there anything I can do to make this website better. By the way, you are free to use my samples (if they are suitable of course) to help other learners too. ๐Ÿ™‚

bee replied 1 year ago

Dear Friend, I am just a candidate and nowadays I m preparing for Ielts exam ( I am not an administrator of this website)… I just show people their mistakes , which I could identify.. And I should admit , that I am not a professional essay checker)))
BY checking works I ,first, improve my own skills, and,second, help people ๐Ÿ™‚
I do not know why, but it is pleasant when someone believe me and thank
So, thank you for your trust , I will help you as I can )

great replied 1 year ago

That’s no problem, I also appreciate people who take their time to help people who they have never seen. Actually I thought you were one of the website moderators who check and assess essays like in many other websites. That is no problem.
As for me, I have already taken IELTS and got 8, but my writin was 7 so I am going to improve my band score. I would like your email to contact if possible. Mine is [email protected]. Good luck

great replied 1 year ago

What skill do you worry about most? Is it writing or reading?

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