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vinay123 asked 2 years ago

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience
In the modern education system, teachers and parents have a great influence on students, this is undeniable truth. But in my opinion, parents definitely take precedence over teachers and play pivotal role in their children future and help in building good personalities. Here I would like to explain my views as below. To begin with, before start of schooling children learn to speak, survive and distinguish well from bad, values of life, morality from their parents. Parents are more involved in their children’s activities than any other because they spend more time than teachers and hence they can understand well about their behaviour and can hone the same to embrace the humanity. For example, children bought up at good home atmosphere, with more cultured and discipline way, will learn to respect others and become a good human being for the society. Furthermore, children learning from their parents are never ending. They learn about family and social responsibility, healthy and prosperous way of living; children seem to be mirror image of parents. For example, if a child grows with criminal & violent background parents, naturally it starts to learn and adapt their parent’s behaviour. Therefore, role of parents are indefinite and significant in everyone lives and they are the milestone who show the way to live in a reverential conduct. On the other hand, although teachers are required to make the children educated in academics which help them to become good professional, but in life most essentials to lead a good life are being taught by parents. Also, Teachers have inadequate time to focus on every individual student’s hone personal behaviour. In conclusion, both teachers and parents are essential in children’s growth but parent’s role overweighs in shaping a children life.

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Rachel Evans answered 2 years ago

may be you want to make it in an essay form before having it assessed?
 

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