Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways the governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 2Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways the governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Sohail Ch asked 6 months ago

Many countries of the world are experiencing serious problems due to overpopulation.It is government and individuals responsibility
to address these issues.
In large cities, overpopulation causing significant problems. That can lead overcrowded and poor living conditions, shaded housing and congested accommodations also can result poor health that might cause vitamin-D deficiency and other serious diseases. The other serious problem is growing rate of crime.Poor ways of living might lead youngsters to crimes or drugs.
A government has a vital role towards dealing these problems.Firstly, Governments should provide, reasonable living and standard housings. Secondly and most importantly, Authorities should focus on health facilities.It is immensely important that good for each and every one of the community. Finally, preemptive measures should be initiated to involve youth into healthy and positive activities. Governments can make a conducive environment by building more clubs, gymnasiums and sports activities. In addition to this, better inter metropoliton policing can ensure less crime rate and relatively peaceful society.
While reducing problems, an individual also can play a pivotal role. By abiding the law, respecting the community and taking the responsibility one can contribute for himself and the vicinity.
Governments and individual, combindely address the rapidly growing population. The government can disseminate awareness about family planing. This also helps, making resources equation balance.
Therefore, it is clear that problems due to overpopulation in urban areas are very serious. The government can mitigate these issues by taking pragmatic initiatives. Providing good health and community services can uplift people’s lifestyle. Also, a citizen can be a helping hand and jointly put his efforts to upgrade the surroundings.

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways the governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
5 (100%) 3 votes

Sohail Ch replied 6 months ago

Please evaluate this essay

Sohail Ch replied 5 months ago

Dear Sir,

Thanks a lot for your comments, it will help me to improve my writing skills.

regards,

Sohail

1 Answers
Rachel Evans answered 5 months ago

Many countries of the world are experiencing serious problems due to overpopulation. It is government and individuals responsibility to address these issues.
In large cities, overpopulation is causing significant problems. That can lead to overcrowded and poor living conditions; shaded housing and congested accommodations also can result in poor health that might cause vitamin-D deficiency and other serious diseases. The other serious problem is growing rate of crime. Poor ways of living might lead youngsters to crimes or drugs. (this part is weak)
A government has a vital role towards dealing these problems. Firstly, Ggovernments should provide, reasonable living (living what?!) and standard housings. Secondly and most importantly, Aauthorities should focus on health facilities. It is immensely important that good for each and every one of the community. Finally, preemptive measures should be initiated to involve youth into healthy and positive activities. Governments can make a conductive environment by building more clubs, gymnasiums and sports activities. In addition to this, better intermetropoliton (typo) policing can ensure less crime rate and relatively peaceful society.
While reducing problems, an individual also can play a pivotal role. By abiding the law, respecting the community and taking the responsibility one can contribute for himself and the vicinity.
Governments and individual, combindely (typo) address the rapidly growing population. The government can disseminate awareness about family planning. This also helps, making resources equation balance.
Therefore, it is clear that problems due to overpopulation in urban areas are very serious. The government can mitigate these issues by taking pragmatic initiatives. Providing good health and community services can uplift people’s lifestyle. Also, a citizen can be a helping hand and jointly put his efforts to upgrade the surroundings.
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Hi, Sohail Ch, here is some feedback and your score:
Overall 6.5

  • 2nd part is more fully covered than the 1st. Naming problems and proposing solution should be equally distributed.
  • Loose connection within parts
  • Capitalize randomly (Government, Authority)
  • Should focus on collocation and phrasal verb, as well as punctuation, spelling.

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways the governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
5 (100%) 3 votes

Sohail Ch replied 6 months ago

Please evaluate this essay

Sohail Ch replied 5 months ago

Dear Sir,

Thanks a lot for your comments, it will help me to improve my writing skills.

regards,

Sohail

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