Overpopulating of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems?

QuestionsOverpopulating of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems?
nguyenlykimngan asked 3 years ago

 It is true that some nations are getting populated and this has led to some tremendous issues for the societies. There have been some problems which are caused by overpopulation, and I believe there are solutions that people can take to prevent the disadvantages.
There are some serious problems caused by overpopulating country and they hold back the nation’s development. Firstly, people could not get full of social welfare, because there are not enough services to help them improve the infrastructure and have a more convenient life. If a family has 5 children, some of them will no have a chance to study, because they cannot afford to pay for schooling. These children could be kept home and do housework or work to support their families in the following years, so they would not have permanent jobs. This is one of the most common contributing factors of unemployment rates. Another impact of overpopulation on the society is that unemployed people could turn into thieves if they stole money from national organizations so this could lead to unstable nation and make people live in despair.
In my view, there are some solutions that the government and individuals could take to prevent the problems described above. One of the most effective ways is that the authorities should limit the number of children each family has, this policy has been applied by most of Asian countries, including Vietnam. Besides, individuals should join hands to set up organizations that help children in education and call for investment. Another solution that could be taken by the governments is that they should invest to enhance the quality of infrastructure and medical services.
In conclusion, there are several ways to solve the problems and reduce the increase in population which could affect the country’s development.

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Rachel Evans answered 3 years ago

Overpopulating of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems?
It is true that some nations are getting overpopulated and this has led to some tremendous issues for the societies. There have been some problems which are caused by overpopulation,(- this repeats the prev sentence) and I believe there are solutions that people can take to prevent the disadvantages.
There are some serious problems caused by overpopulating country and they hold back the nation’s development. Firstly, people could not get full of social welfare, because there are not enough services to help them improve the infrastructure (*!! – them improve the infrastructure?!) and have a more convenient life. If a family has 5 children, some of them will not have a chance to study, because they cannot afford to pay for schooling. These children could be kept home and do housework or work to support their families in the following years, so they would not have permanent jobs. This is one of the most common contributing factors of unemployment rates. Another impact of overpopulation on the society is that unemployed people could turn into thieves if they stole money from national organizations so this could lead to unstable nation and make people live in despair.
In my view, there are some solutions that the government and individuals could take to prevent the problems described above. One of the most effective ways is that the authorities should limit the number of children each family has, this policy has been applied by most of Asian countries, including Vietnam. Besides, individuals should join hands to set up organizations that help children in education and call for investment. Another solution that could be taken by the governments is that they should invest to enhance the quality of infrastructure and medical services.
In conclusion, there are several ways to solve the problems and reduce the increase in population which could affect the country’s development.
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