Need help assess writing task 2

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YoYo asked 2 years ago

It is often claimed that electronic devices will soon replace paper books.
Do you agree or disagree?
 
In recent year, the technology has developed so rapid that many people believe it would eventually make traditional books vanished. I completely disagree with this idea because I believe that both electronic books and the paperback ones will be equally important in people lives.
On the one hand, it is obvious that electronic gadgets have many advantages since they are composed with many useful functions. One can have access to thousands of books anytime, anywhere with comfort because those devices are handy, convenient to carry around. Another key benefit is that people can share their thoughts on books they read and discuss with millions readers in the world on the Internet platform. There has been a tremendous increase of views in websites like Amazon or Goodreads where people can share their opinion about books with everyone. Those websites not only enhance their interest in reading but also bring people together.
On the other hand, traditional books will remain its crucial role even in the technology era. Firstly, the elderly people or those in the rural area who do not familiar with electronic devices will continue using paper books. There are also people who would enjoy holding a real book rather than a frigid mobile phone, so they prefer the traditional way of reading. Secondly, reading paper books may help relieve stress while staring at an electronic gadget too long may cause many health problems such as short-sighted eyes due to the screen’s blue light.
In conclusion, even though many people think that books in paperback form have become archaic now, I still believe that they will remain to play an important role in the modern society along with the electronic ones.
 

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Rachel Evans answered 2 years ago

In recent year, the technology has developed so rapidly that many people believe it would eventually make traditional books vanished. I completely disagree with this idea because I believe that both electronic books and the paperback ones will be are equally important in people lives.
On the one hand, it is obvious that electronic gadgets have many advantages since they are composed with many useful functions. One can have access to thousands of books anytime, anywhere with comfort because those devices are handy, convenient to carry around. Another key benefit is that people can share their thoughts on books they read and discuss with millions readers in the world on the Internet platform. There has been a tremendous increase of views in websites like Amazon or Goodreads, where people can share their opinion about books with everyone. Those websites not only enhance their interest in reading but also bring people together.
On the other hand, traditional books will remain its crucial role even in the technology era. Firstly, the elderly people or those in the rural area who do not familiar with electronic devices will continue using paper books. There are also people who would enjoy holding a real book rather than a frigid mobile phone, so they prefer the traditional way of reading. Secondly, reading paper books may help relieve stress while staring at an electronic gadget too long may cause many health problems such as short-sighted eyes due to the screen’s blue light.
In conclusion, even though many people think that books in paperback form have become archaic now, I still believe that they will remain to play an important role in the modern society along with the electronic ones.
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