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Dilshod asked 2 years ago

The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances.Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.               There are widely differing views on the issue of food production’ range and quality.It has both views for the people.         It is axiomatic that technological and scientific advances are likely to predispose to improvements and betterment for life.Range and quality of food are improved by both advances.As due to, the majority of people assist improvements in creating diverse discoveries for food production, with a view to ensuring colossal benefits for our life.These improvements benefited to  our food productions’ s range and quality.A variety of increasing situations are the key factors for our enormous good health.                                                               Undoubtedly, numerous advances have been altered in the range and quality of food. Some people think that these conditions are allowed to harmful for our health.These advances contribute to diverse alterations virtually 30%-40%.For example, because of range and quality food’s improvements, plethora of people have been health woes in the US.These situations are allowed to increase in mental and cultural degenaration.GM food are uprooting a wide range of improvements In some situations.             In conclusion, I infer that people have a duty to create unprecedented growth and fruitful results in food production.They are obliged to fathom numerous harmful situations for our health.They are permitted to uproot obsolete advances and conditions, with a view to creating vicissitudes of opinions to food production.The majority of scientists should go further than simply discerning products’ range and quality.

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Rachel Evans answered 2 years ago

The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.            
There are widely differing views on the issue of food production’ range and quality. It has both views for the people.        
This introduction is too general
It is axiomatic that technological and scientific advances are likely to predispose to improvements and betterment for life. Range and quality of food are improved by both advances. As due to, the majority of people assist improvements in creating diverse discoveries for food production, with a view to ensuring colossal benefits for our life. These improvements benefited to our food productions’ s range and quality.  A variety of increasing situations are the key factors for our enormous good health.          
Undoubtedly, numerous advances have been altered in the range and quality of food. Some people think that these conditions are allowed to harmful for our health (?). These advances contribute to diverse alterations virtually 30%-40%. For example, because of range and quality food’s improvements, plethora of people have has been health woes in the US. These situations are allowed to increase in mental and cultural degeneration. GM food are uprooting a wide range of improvements in some situations.            
In conclusion, I infer that people have a duty to create unprecedented growth and fruitful results in food production. They are obliged to fathom numerous harmful situations for our health. They are permitted to uproot obsolete advances and conditions, with a view to creating vicissitudes of opinions to food production. The majority of scientists should go further than simply discerning products’ range and quality.
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