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Dilshod asked 4 months ago

Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them.Education and job training are better ways to help them.Do you agree or disagree?                                                         Over the past few decades, there have been widening gulf between conveying criminals to jails or not.The question whether arises that imprisonment has been the most popular form of punishment ,but many also believe that rehabilitation have a duty to be the best option.Both views will be alongside on my stance.                                                       It is self axiom that rehabilitation customarily assist some criminals in returning to their new life or yielding from predicaments to prosperous freedom.A prime ecample is England, they send inmates to job training and education that judgements announce suitable punishment for them namely vandalism and tax evasion.Moreover, the will of the judges cause to give another chance to criminals in some conditions on the grounds that some criminals have a duty to take next opportunity for their family members particularly for their children.Hence, judges should opt their resolutions rightly in terms of a miscarriage of justice.                                   However, some of the criminals have a duty to take extreme measures namely murderers and rapists on the grounds that for these crimes, prison is the best answer.Futhermore, prison contributes to reduce woes that it is the key factors for influencing peace in some ways.Admittedly, jails punish numerous inmates for their horrible crimes and they modify vicissitudes of criminals opinions.Apart from that, many help them to fathom their mistakes, with a view to procuring their hopes another time.Thus, prisons should negate some issues that they send out a strong message to would be criminals.                                                      In conclusion, it appears to me that people have a duty to see the panacea to address some woes especially crimes.

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Nam Phuong answered 3 months ago

Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them.Education and job training are better ways to help them.Do you agree or disagree?

Over the past few decades, there have been widening gulf between conveying criminals to jails or not.The question whether arises that imprisonment has been the most popular form of punishment ,but many also believe that rehabilitation have a duty to be the best option.Both views will be alongside (discussed) on my stance.                              It is self axiom that rehabilitation customarily assist some criminals in returning (return) to their new life or yielding from predicaments to prosperous (prosper) freedom.A prime  ecample (An example) is England, they send inmates to job training and education that judgements (the judes) announce (as) suitable punishment for them namely vandalism and tax evasion.Moreover, the will of the judges cause to give another chance to criminals in some conditions on the grounds that some criminals have a duty to take next opportunity for their family members particularly for their children.Hence, judges should opt their resolutions rightly (right) in terms of a miscarriage of justice.

However, some of the criminals have a duty to take extreme measures namely murderers and rapists on the grounds that for ( . For) these crimes, prison is the best answer. Futhermore (furthermore), prison contributes to reduce woes that it is the key factors for influencing (to influence) peace in some ways.Admittedly, jails punish numerous inmates for their horrible crimes and they modify vicissitudes of criminals opinions.Apart from that, many ( of jails) help them to fathom their mistakes, with a view to procuring their hopes another time.Thus, prisons should negate some issues that they send out a strong message to would be criminals.(???)

In conclusion, it appears to me that people have a duty to see (==> find) the panacea to address some woes especially crimes.

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