Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people think other type of progress are important for a country. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

QuestionsCategory: DicussionMany governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people think other type of progress are important for a country. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
danielct asked 8 months ago

Although it is sometimes thought that government should aim to the economic progress, other people believe that a larger variety of target ought to be achieved.
In my opinion, I consider that the increase of GDP must be the main focus for public authorities, which point out to manage the State stably.
On the one hand, some people think that a higher level of economic growth means a rise in wealthy of State which, consequently, allow an improvement of facilities of the nation.
In other words, an elevated rate of growth attracts foreign investments that, therefore, could be used to reduce the unemployment level. A good example is represented by Rome, which has been able to catch plenty of capitals from Emirates with using of important events such as Rome Islamic Forum. All of this types of conferences have permitted an increase of new projects that will have started by the end of the year. As a result, the number of unemployed people will be reduced, and thus persons could have a better lifestyle.
On the other hand, it is often believed that it is better if the emphasis on goal is on diverse topics. As people, we live on the Earth, and it must bee saved from risks that are often correlated with the economic progress. For example, the factories are the major responsible for air pollution. An increase of wealthy of nations means a wider demand for goods and a rise in new industries. This could irreparably damage our planet and get it inhospitable for human life.
To sum up, although government should focus its effort on the quality of life in its country, the economic progress is the only method to achieve it.

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people think other type of progress are important for a country. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
3 (60%) 2 votes

danielct replied 7 months ago

Thank you. Your mark reflects the official result.

1 Answers
Rachel Evans answered 7 months ago

Although it is sometimes thought that government should aim to the economic progress, other people believe that a larger variety of target ought to be achieved. In my opinion, I consider that the increase of GDP must be the main focus for public authorities, which point out to manage the State stably.
On the one hand, some people think that a higher level of economic growth means a rise in wealthy of State which, consequently, allow an improvement of facilities of the nation. (why break this into 2 paras?)
In other words, an elevated rate of growth attracts foreign investments that, therefore, could be used to reduce the unemployment level. A good example is represented by Rome, which has been able to catch plenty of capitals from Emirates with using the use of/ (by making use of) important events such as Rome Islamic Forum. All of this these types of conferences have permitted an increase of new projects that will have started by the end of the year. As a result, the number of unemployed people will be reduced, and thus persons could have a better lifestyle life.
On the other hand, it is often believed that it is better if the emphasis on goal is on diverse topics. As people, we live on the Earth, and it must bee saved from risks that are often correlated with the economic progress (you should make it shorter and more to the point). For example, the factories are of the major responsible for air pollution. An increase of wealthy of nations means a wider demand for goods and a rise in new industries. This could irreparably damage our planet and get it inhospitable to human life.
To sum up, although government should focus its effort on the quality of life in its country, the economic progress is the only method to achieve it.
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Hi, danielct
Overall 7.0- (solid 6.5) 

  • good range of vocab. and sentence structures
  • some places are still unclear
  • should focus more on word choice

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people think other type of progress are important for a country. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
3 (60%) 2 votes

danielct replied 7 months ago

Thank you. Your mark reflects the official result.

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