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adamali asked 3 years ago

 
Kindly evaluate task 2 academic with possible score
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.
Recycling is considered a beneficial process which adds to a country economy, and also is a sign of civilization. However, many areas over the globe still not familiar with recycling measures.Thus many people argue that recycling should be obligatory. I believe that applying laws is very important, nevertheless, there are other possible methods which can be helpful. In this essay, I will explain my opinion and share some examples.
Those who support the idea of fixing laws and penalties for not recycling think that people will not be compliant with rules unless there is punishment. They claim that financial penalties will make people more engaged in the recycling process, moreover, this will add to the community profits. Others consider helping in public services such as cleaning or garden caring is more acceptable punishment. So, it is evident that law can help people to be more motivated and in same time help the community in case of a penalty.
But the law is not the only way for improving people habits. Other ways are still valid. For instance, raising awareness about benefits of recycling can contribute in changing people minds through advertisements. Another solution is giving money in return to people’s old materials. Take Cairo governorate for example, they start a project to collect this stuff after being sorted out by you, they will pay sum of money, by this way many people try recycling to gain money.
To sum up, recycling is a vital process in our life. It could be increased by various ways include law and increase awareness. I hope these methods could be applied soon and help in community improvement.

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Nam Phuong answered 3 years ago

Kindly evaluate task 2 academic with possible score
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.
Recycling is considered a beneficial process which adds (certain value) to a country economy, and also is a sign of civilization. However, many areas over the globe (are) still not familiar with recycling measures.Thus many people argue that recycling should be obligatory. I believe that applying laws is very important, nevertheless, there are other possible methods which can be helpful. In this essay, I will explain my opinion and share some examples.
Those who support the idea of fixing laws and penalties for not recycling think that people will not be compliant with rules unless there is punishment. They claim that financial penalties will make people more engaged in the recycling process, moreover, this will add to the community profits. Others consider helping (taking part/ participating) in public services such as cleaning (public places) or garden caring is more acceptable punishment. So, it is evident that law can help people to be more motivated and in same time help the community in case of a penalty.
But the law is not the only way for improving people habits. Other ways are still valid. For instance, raising awareness about benefits of recycling can contribute in changing (to change) people minds through advertisements. Another solution is giving money in return to people’s old materials. Take Cairo governorate (authority/ government) for example, they start a project to collect this stuff after being sorted out by you (citizens), they (the project) will pay (garbage collectors)sum of money, by this way many people try recycling (to recycle) to gain money.
To sum up, recycling is a vital process in our life. It could be increased by various ways include (including) law and increase (increasing) awareness. I hope these methods could be applied soon and help in community improvement.

T.R: 8.0

  • address all parts of the task
  • present well-developed response with supported ideas

C.C: 7.5

  • logically organize information and ideas

L.R: 7.0

  • should use wider range of vocabulary

G.A: 7.0

  • minor grammatical errors.

Overall: 7.5

Good job!

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