In many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?

QuestionsIn many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?
Balachandhar Raghu asked 2 years ago

In many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?
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Balachandhar Raghu replied 2 years ago

Thanks a lot Rachael i will definitely look into the improvements. This is my first task of writing and i have 2 months for my IELTS. Thanks for the support.

Rachel replied 2 years ago

You are welcome! 😀 Hope you do the best

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Balachandhar Raghu answered 2 years ago

Every Country Needs to be technologically advanced to cope up with the pace of development in the global market.Internet is the base for all technological advancements.In this essay we are going to discuss about the ratio of money spent by the goverment to enable internet access to all its citizens and its benefits.
Internet can be considered a minor factor when compared to the basic needs of citizens such as health care benefits and education. When considering an individual’s development in terms of exposure and knowledge internet plays a vital role.A country is always dependent on its younger workforce for the development of economy. The younger generations are scattered throughout the nation right from rural to Metros who are in definite need of internet to increase their knowledge and get exposed to global scenarios which will give them a upper hand to educate and innovate.
Education and innovation will definitely improve the employability of the students and market for new business.Hence Internet would be a key to education and exposure. Internet cannot be compared as like a primary spending such as healthcare or education.It is an one time investment for spreading throughout the nation and later on minor maintenance which is going to be outnumbered by the benefits we receive through them.
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In many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?
3 (60%) 1 vote

Balachandhar Raghu replied 2 years ago

Thanks a lot Rachael i will definitely look into the improvements. This is my first task of writing and i have 2 months for my IELTS. Thanks for the support.

Rachel replied 2 years ago

You are welcome! 😀 Hope you do the best

Rachel Evans answered 2 years ago

Every country needs (why do you capitalise these initial letters?to be technologically advanced to cope keep up with the pace of development in the global market. Internet is the base for all technological advancements. In this essay we are going to discuss about the ratio of money spent by the government to enable internet access to all its citizens and its benefits.
Internet can be considered a minor factor when compared to the basic needs of citizens such as health care benefits and education. When considering an individual’s development in terms of exposure and knowledge internet plays a vital role. A country is always dependent on its younger workforce for the development of economy. The younger generations are scattered throughout the nation right from rural to Metros who are in definite need of internet to increase their knowledge and get exposed to global scenarios which will give them an upper hand to educate and innovate.
Education and innovation will definitely improve the employability of the students and market for new business. Hence Internet would be a key to education and exposure. Internet cannot be compared as like a primary spending such as healthcare or education. It is an one time investment for spreading throughout the nation and later on minor maintenance which is going to be outnumbered by the benefits we receive through them.
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In many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?
3 (60%) 1 vote

Balachandhar Raghu replied 2 years ago

Thanks a lot Rachael i will definitely look into the improvements. This is my first task of writing and i have 2 months for my IELTS. Thanks for the support.

Rachel replied 2 years ago

You are welcome! 😀 Hope you do the best

Balachandhar Raghu answered 2 years ago

Technological advancements are always required for the development of a country as a whole .Government’s consider internet as a base of technology for which the foundation has to be laid along the length and breadth of the country.This has led to an increase in the percentage spending with respect to the annual budget.In this essay we are going to analyze is this the appropriate way to use the government’s budget and provide suitable suggestions.
                                      Improving the internet connectivity across the nation seem to be a step towards digital life.Digital life ensures better connectivity and exposure to rural areas where internet could serve as a medium of education and innovation.When students and graduates use it to the fullest they develop better skill sets for education and employment. With better skill sets the graduates would be fully employable which would boost the job market and benefit the economy.Students will maintain par excellence while competing with students of other countries in the global scenario with the support of internet.Internet is more of an open ground to innovate in a better way for students pursuing their education.
                                      Digital life through internet is meant to make day to day life better. With Internet as a tool any medical emergencies can reach for support through various mediums like facebook, twitter etc.What we are currently witnessing is a digital era where even critical medical emergencies are handled through skype calls from various countries and medical funding or support is garnered through these medium with a click of a button.
Considering Education, Health care benefits and Employment as a primary requirement, our above discussion has shown how internet is key in improving these primary aspects and thus we should support the government’s decision to consider a major spending for improving the internet access of the nation. This is going to be more of an one time investment with an nominal maintenance in the forthcoming years.

In many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?
3 (60%) 1 vote

Balachandhar Raghu replied 2 years ago

Thanks a lot Rachael i will definitely look into the improvements. This is my first task of writing and i have 2 months for my IELTS. Thanks for the support.

Rachel replied 2 years ago

You are welcome! 😀 Hope you do the best

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