I'm taking the general IELTS. so could you score my letter and give me some feedback and tips thank you

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 1I'm taking the general IELTS. so could you score my letter and give me some feedback and tips thank you
ashish patil asked 3 weeks ago

You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority and say.
How did you get to know about the plans
what problems will your neighborhood face
suggest possible solution to those problems.

Dear. sir.
I am Ashish patil, writting to express my disappointment regarding build a new airport at my residence area which could lead to many problems to community.I saw this news on television and read in newspaper also.
Firstly , on which land you planed to build new airport this place plays important roal in everyones life. This is used by community for their recreational activities , such as jogging , playing, meeting each other and so on . There are number of plants which increase beauty of the place . It creates a fresh air and good atmosphere for mankind.There is a big ground and a small garden where children plays and study. Senior citizens most of their time spend at this place. This place is in center of the city.
If you start to eracting the airpoart at place people should traval to another place for these activities. Secondly ,it create a more noice , tarffic and air pollution , this could result rise in dease . Over all it is difficult for people to survive in community.
I would like to suggest another place for airport which should be out of the city .It would help me survive in the good atmosphere
I look forward to see you.
Thanks
Ashish Patil.

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