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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
 
 
Some people believe that using animals as a food source and conducting experiments with them are both cruel and useless. Meanwhile, their opponents think that animals suit for these purposes never better. Both of these points of view are reasonable to some extent. Personally, I mostly support the second opinion, although with the row of stipulations.
On the one hand, the way of how some laboratory researches are conducted, is frightening. Animals often are treated extremely rudely and cruelly in process of testing cosmetics, household chemicals or drugs. The vast majority of such experiments ends with the animal’s death.
Eating animal meat can be considered like pointless, because there are lots of protein sources besides meat. Moreover, it seems unfair when a creature is born to die.
On the other hand, thousands of discoveries would be impossible without laboratory research. If not to use animals for this, then it must be a human who will different products and chemicals tested on. Various cures and vaccines were invented owing to laboratory research with animals participating in. Thanks to these inventions thousands of people were rescued from illnesses or death.
 Meanwhile, eating animal meat is some kind of tradition for us, as our ancestors could only provide themselves with some food by hunting. Probably, this habit is laid genetically.
As it can be seen, both points of view have their reasons. In my opinion, animals should be involved in researches provided that benefits from its conducting are really scientifically worthy. It should be also mentioned that animals in circuses and zoos are always kept in inappropriate conditions, they are often lacking in food and sufficient space. What is worse, they are ferociously beaten during training. Regarding this, I am firmly against using animals for such fun. And finally, I consider eating animal meat as just one of the wide range of possible food sources, but it is the right of each person to consume it or not.
 

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Rachel Evans answered 1 year ago

Some people believe that using animals as a food source and conducting experiments with them are both cruel and useless. Meanwhile, their opponents think that animals suit for these purposes never better. Both of these points of view are reasonable to some extent. Personally, I mostly support the second opinion, although with the row of stipulations. (?)
On the one hand, the way of how some laboratory researches are conducted, is frightening. Animals often are treated extremely rudely and cruelly in process of testing cosmetics, household chemicals or drugs. The vast majority of such experiments ends with the animal’s death. Eating animal meat can be considered like pointless, because there are lots of protein sources besides meat. Moreover, it seems unfair when a creature is born to die.
On the other hand, thousands of discoveries would be impossible without laboratory research. If not to use animals for this, then it must be a human who will be tested on [different products and chemicals tested on]. Various cures and vaccines were invented owing to laboratory research with animals participating in. Thanks to these inventions thousands of people were rescued from illnesses or death. Meanwhile, eating animal meat is some kind of tradition for us, as our ancestors could only provide themselves with some food by hunting. Probably, this habit is laid genetically.
As it can be seen, both points of view have their reasons. In my opinion, animals should be involved in researches provided that benefits from its conducting are really scientifically worthy. [It should be also mentioned that animals in circuses and zoos are always kept in inappropriate conditions, they are often lacking in food and sufficient space. What is worse, they are ferociously beaten during training. Regarding this, I am firmly against using animals for such fun.] This part is redundant. And finally, I consider eating animal meat as just one of the wide range of possible food sources, but it is the right of each person to consume it or not.
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