HI, I'm taking the test in Feb, could you guys pls asset my essay, I really need to know where I stand, lots of lovee

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Dương Kiều Khanh asked 10 months ago

Q: Some people think that living in big cities is getting more convenient. but there are also people who think it is rather becoming harder to live. discuss both view and give your opinion?
 
There has been a growing controversy over whether dwelling in big cities is becoming more of a drudgery or a blessing. my essay will discuss both opinions and, personally, choose a better fitted description.
On the one hand, life in the big cities is turning more automated and refreshing than ever, large cities are often economic markets, and thus, international and national enterprises primarily focus on funneling into far-reaching projects here due to the dense population and urbanization. As a result, they get more state-of-the-art amenities as well as entertainment. Another benefit is the automaton built for efficient services, such as ATM machines or guide robots.
On the other hand, every coin has two sides and along with the modern facilities are abundance of downsides. As cities rapidly develop, they attract more citizens, making them crowded. All the hustle and bustle then leads to a far more fast-paced style and harsh living environment as can be seen through crime rates, unemployment rates and acceleration in private transportations that in turn cause frustrating noise. When private vehicles are ubiquitously in use, this will cause unwanted polluted air thus causing health problems. As a result, a part of the unpleased citizens decide to head back to the rural area to eschew all the possible problems.
To conclude, every individual prefers a different dwelling. I, individually choose the obsolete serenity over automatons. however, each senators should try to lidiquate their city’s disadvantages to optimize the living standard.

HI, I'm taking the test in Feb, could you guys pls asset my essay, I really need to know where I stand, lots of lovee
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Thuy Dung Pham answered 9 months ago

There has been a growing controversy over whether dwelling in big cities is becoming more of a drudgery or a blessing. my My essay will discuss both opinions and, personally, choose a better fitted description.
On the one hand, life in the big cities is turning more automated and refreshing than ever,  . large Large cities are often economic markets, and thus, international and national enterprises primarily focus on funneling into far-reaching projects here due to the dense population and urbanization. As a result, they get more state-of-the-art amenities as well as entertainment. Another benefit is the automaton built for efficient services, such as ATM machines or guide robots.
On the other hand, every coin has two sides and along with the modern facilities are abundance of downsides. As cities rapidly develop, they attract more citizens, making them crowded. All the hustle and bustle then leads to a far more fast-paced style and harsh living environment as can be seen through crime rates, unemployment rates and acceleration in private transportations that in turn cause frustrating noise. When private vehicles are ubiquitously in use, . (full stop) this This will cause unwanted polluted air thus causing that causes health problems. As a result, a part of the unpleased citizens decide to head back to the rural area to eschew all the possible problems.
To conclude, every individual prefers a different dwelling. I, individually choose the obsolete serenity over automatons. however, each senators should try to lidiquate their city’s disadvantages to optimize the living standard.
Task achievement: 5.0 (presents some main ideas but the development is not always clear, these are limited and not sufficiently developed)
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0 (present information with some organisation but may be lack of overall progression)
Lexical Resource: 5.0 (uses only basic and limited range of vocabulary)
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 5.0 (uses only a very limited range of structures, some structures are accurate but errors predominate and punctuation is often faulty)
Overall: 5.0 (this task needs to be improved. You should write more logical, precise, and concise and pay more attention on spelling)
 
 

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