Hi! I am posting my essay again hoping you could make just a little time for it and check and score it please. I know you are so busy trying to help all the subscribers, but I was also hoping to get accurate score for it to know what band I should aim for.

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 2Hi! I am posting my essay again hoping you could make just a little time for it and check and score it please. I know you are so busy trying to help all the subscribers, but I was also hoping to get accurate score for it to know what band I should aim for.
great asked 2 years ago

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In todayโ€™s rapidly changing world, transport network plays a vital role in the development of all spheres of any country. Populations are also heavily dependent on transports such vehicles and railroads to commute or travel to short or mid distances. In my opinion, governmentsโ€™ investment on the improvement of railways but not roads cannot be supported because of the inability of trains to serve as the main transport network in the streets and comparatively higher cost of railroads to be built to serve multiple purposes.

First and foremost, trains cannot serve as the main network for any city. This can be explained by the fact that railroads need specially prepared lines, they cannot carry rapid turns or changes of direction which is specific of the urban infrastructure. For example, trains cannot run in all streets forming traffic like vehicles that we are used to observing in our everyday life. For this reasons the idea cannot be supported.

Secondly, railways have limited capacity in terms of heavy traffic and therefore they cannot support lines of thousands of trains running at the same time. For instance, taxis and buses can run minute by minute taking and dropping passengers in any directions, which is not to say about trains of course.

Finally, roads are easier to construct and maintain because they already have the base that has been formed by human activity. Governments need not spend as much amount of the funds as they spend to set and develop railway network. Of course, the latter is an integral part of the system, however, it does not mean that railway should be developed more.

In conclusion, I believe that countries should set subsidize roads more than railroads because the former is the main transportation and communication system and the latter serve as an alternative network. For these reasons I disagree that railways can serve as the main system for the economy of a country.

Hi! I am posting my essay again hoping you could make just a little time for it and check and score it please. I know you are so busy trying to help all the subscribers, but I was also hoping to get accurate score for it to know what band I should aim for.
4 (80%) 1 vote

great replied 1 year ago

Dear, thank you very much. I appreciate your time and effort.

great replied 1 year ago

I will look forward to your suggestions to improve it to 8 or more ๐Ÿ™‚

bee replied 1 year ago

I think if You will use a range of academic vocab. you would get higher result
I suggest you to read some books or learn by heart words ( book {advancing vocabulary} has a huge number of academic words ). And do not stop writind essays ๐Ÿ˜‰

great replied 1 year ago

Thanks a lot dear friend. I hope I will soon start working on the advanced vocabulary ๐Ÿ™‚

1 Answers
bee answered 1 year ago

Great essay . I put 7 … )

Hi! I am posting my essay again hoping you could make just a little time for it and check and score it please. I know you are so busy trying to help all the subscribers, but I was also hoping to get accurate score for it to know what band I should aim for.
4 (80%) 1 vote

great replied 1 year ago

Dear, thank you very much. I appreciate your time and effort.

great replied 1 year ago

I will look forward to your suggestions to improve it to 8 or more ๐Ÿ™‚

bee replied 1 year ago

I think if You will use a range of academic vocab. you would get higher result
I suggest you to read some books or learn by heart words ( book {advancing vocabulary} has a huge number of academic words ). And do not stop writind essays ๐Ÿ˜‰

great replied 1 year ago

Thanks a lot dear friend. I hope I will soon start working on the advanced vocabulary ๐Ÿ™‚

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