Hello!thuy dung pham and rachel… please access my essay and suggest me how I can improve myself in writing.

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 2Hello!thuy dung pham and rachel… please access my essay and suggest me how I can improve myself in writing.
Sahil asked 7 months ago

The wealth gap between 1st world and 3rd world countries seems to be increasing. How can we reduce this gap? Do you think that developed countries have a duty to assist developing countries in anyway? 
It is undeniable the fact that the financial gap between developed and developing nations has been increasing for three decades. In this essay I will examine measures which governments of less developed regions can take to remove this difference.
Many veterns believe that some measures should be taken by governments of deveoping nations. Firstly, the major problem in such territories is lack of education among inhabitants. In this case, governments ought to provide free or affordable education to individuals so that people can become capable to earn their livelihoods by their own. Secondly, the next critical issue is unemployment because few sources of employment are available. It is important for local councils to encourage foreign investors to establish their businesses in the such territories, hence, it gives employment to local people as well as became source of income for government because these companies would pay high taxes.
In my prospective, developed nations ought to provide assistence to less developed regions. In fact, wealthy nations take plethora of actions in their territories to betterment of humanity. But when they will offer help to developing countries it gives benefit to entire human race.
In conclusion,it is quite obvious that the gap between rich and poor nations can be erased after imposing such strigent measures.

Hello!thuy dung pham and rachel… please access my essay and suggest me how I can improve myself in writing.
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