Crime rate in teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries in recent years. Give some possible reasons and suggest solutions to overcome youth crimes.

QuestionsCrime rate in teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries in recent years. Give some possible reasons and suggest solutions to overcome youth crimes.
nguyenlykimngan asked 4 years ago

 In recent years, the rate of juvenile crime has climbed considerably in some nations. There could be several reasons why this is the case, I believe that there are solutions to tackle the problems above.
There are various reasons why there is an alarming rate and motives of children who commit crime. Firstly, if the youngsters were not educated, they would not be awareness of the imprtance of commiting crime and make the society unstable by causing roberries. Another reason why the rate of juvenile crime inreasing is that the children addict to video gamee, which could lead to violence and affect other individuals’ lives. For example, there were alomost 101,000 youth aged from 12 to 17 accused of criminal code violation reported by police in Canada in 2014. If the children make friends with people who are taking drugs or criminals, they will be affected, because the youngters would be enticed to break the law.
In my view, there are certain solutions to tackle the problems described above. Firstly, the governments should improve the education of the countries, since this factor is the most important that has effects on children’s thoughts. Secondly, announcing regulations that prevent them from robbing or stealing fom the others in order tp threat them. Thirdly, the children who have committed crime should be sent to educational schools. Another solution that could be taken by individuals is to keep in mind the nagative impact of taking drugs which would lead children to crime.
In conclusion, there are various measures can be taken to solve the problems and reduce the crime rate which would help the teenagers have healthier lives 

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Rachel Evans answered 4 years ago

In recent years, the rate of juvenile crime has climbed considerably in some nations. There could be several reasons why this is the case, I believe that there are solutions to tackle the problems above.
There are various reasons why there is an alarming rate and motives of children who commit crime. Firstly, if the youngsters were not educated, they would not be awareness aware of the imprtance of commiting (W.choice) crime and make the society unstable by causing roberries. Another reason why the rate of juvenile crime is increasing is that the children are addicted to video games, which could lead to violence and affect other individuals’ lives. For example, there were almost 101,000 youth aged from 12 to 17 accused of criminal code violation reported by police in Canada in 2014. If the children make friends with people who are taking drugs or criminals, they will be affected, because the youngsters would be enticed to break the law.
In my view, there are certain solutions to tackle the problems described above. Firstly, the governments should improve the education of the countries/ (their education systems – to avoid repetition), since this factor is the most important that has effects on children’s thoughts. Secondly, announcing regulations that prevent them from robbing or stealing from the others in order to threat them (incomplete sentence). Thirdly, the children who have committed crime should be sent to educational schools. Another solution that could be taken by individuals is to keep in mind the nagative negative impacts of taking drugs which would lead children to crime.
In conclusion, there are various measures can be taken to solve the problems and reduce the crime rate which would help the teenagers have healthier lives 
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