Could you please score my writing task 2 and marks my mistake. Thank you so much.

QuestionsCould you please score my writing task 2 and marks my mistake. Thank you so much.
AnnaPanama asked 2 years ago
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AnnaPanama answered 2 years ago

Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?    
 
Some people have the opinion that governments should curb global warming, however, others feel that this problem is a question of personal responsibility. In my opinion, governments have more opportunities to stop global warming than individuals. This essay will look at both sides before sharing my own opinion.
On the one hand, social attention to climate change could encourage people to increase personal responsibility. People should organize community meetings to get more information about global warming. For instance, a number of people nowadays use electric cars rather than gasoline cars in an effort to save nature. Thus, it is clear that people are sensitive to information and can be encouraged to be more responsible for the environment.
On the other hand, climate change has a big influence on the world ecosystem. Governments have the legislative ability to make companies accountable for practice harm the environment. Countries like Australia, for example, have made strict penalties for companies who fail to operate in environmentally friendly ways. Thus it is clear that these penalties act as a tremendous step towards stopping global warming.
I completely disagree that only individual responsibility can stop global warming. Climate change is a very major global concern and only international connection of governments from different countries can curb this ecological catastrophe.
After analyzing both points of views I believe that governments are more liable for global warming than individual people. It is hoped that international government action will create practices to stop climate change in the foreseeable future.
 
 
 
 
 

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