Could you please score my writing task 2 and marks my mistake..General ielts

QuestionsCould you please score my writing task 2 and marks my mistake..General ielts
Anam asked 2 years ago
Anam replied 2 years ago

Kindly score my essay

Anam replied 2 years ago

Kindly score my essay

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Anam answered 2 years ago

 
As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.
Modern Technology impact worldwide. In among advance inventions computer is being utilized frequently. Thus students have prefer to seek knowledge from internet .But my perspective is that teachers have their own worth in academics
Furthermore, although computer has got access on many aspects .Such as student can easily understand his subject by read realated description through internet. Student can download many book as they can. So through this invention things have become cost effective. In ancient time people seek their knowledge from scholars and renowned teachers. Owing to this students were travel long .Now computer has feasible the education system but we could not neglect the significant role of teacher 
However, teacher are being taught centuries .They are supposed to be our mentors. Teacher has a key role in the building up the education .A good student who is leading a successful life is only due to the efforts of teacher. Although computer provides desire academic material in seconds, it  have turned the diversion of thinking.Inspite of all, it is impossible that computer take the position of any institution .Because students can read the topic by themselves through computer but how they can understand it clearly. Computer assist us in our studies instead of teachs us.  .Moreover it become downcast when anybody study through computer in isolation. The environment of class where good teacher will be teaching to their students it would be fascinating and look pleasant
In Conclusion, teacher neither be replaced by any latest equipped technology such as computer. Student have been getting their knowledge from these precious gems forever

Could you please score my writing task 2 and marks my mistake..General ielts
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Anam replied 2 years ago

Kindly score my essay

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Kindly score my essay

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