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Nikeet asked 1 year ago

More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.

Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.

Answer :

As per present scenario most of educated persons turn to other famous countries to fulfill their carrier objective into good job field. Well knowledgeable people are unable to achieve their goals into their own countries because of numerous reasons like high poverty, low wage rate system and so on. Other believes that such type of movements are not a new activity.
Firstly, Due to modern lifestyle, it is very difficult to fulfill their wants at minimum wage rates. Prices for product are increasing day by day as it is sign of danger for those whose qualifications are not considering at high level. Persons are working for more hours but instead of it they receive only low incomes which is the main cause as number of people turns to other countries.
secondly, Development of countries represents only by total income of their own nation. Total income will be increase if people could be done work for their particular country. Government must implement new programs and strategies to encourage persons to do work for our country because it will increase the growth and development of country.
To sum it up, I believe that if requirements and needs of person will complete at their own country then they would never be took decision as shifted to another country to only earn money. people will be stratified if government pay wages and salaries as per their working conditions. People should also tried to pay attention to do for their own country as rather it would find job at another countries. The statement also state that ” your growth means your country will develop and vise versa. “

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Rachel Evans answered 1 year ago

As per present scenario most of educated persons turn to other famous countries to fulfill their carrier objective into good job field. Well knowledgeable// -knowledged people are unable to achieve their goals into their own countries because of numerous reasons like high poverty, low wage rate system and so on. Other believes that such types of movements are not a new activity.

Firstly, due to modern lifestyle, it is very difficult to fulfill their wants at minimum wage rates. Prices for product are increasing day by day as it is sign of danger for those whose qualifications are not considering /considered at high level. Persons are working for more hours but instead of it (?!) they receive only low incomes which is the main cause as (word choice) number of people turns to other countries.

Secondly, development of countries represents only by total income of their own nation. Total income will be increase if people could be done work (?) for their particular country. Government must implement new programs and strategies to encourage persons to do work for our country because it will increase the growth and development of country.

To sum it up, I believe that if requirements and needs of person will complete at their own country then they would never be took decision (grammar) as shifted to another country to only earn money. people will be stratified if government pay wages and salaries as per their working conditions. People should also tried (grammar) to pay attention to do for their own country as rather it would find job at another (word choice) countries. The statement also state that ” your growth means your country will develop and vise versa. “

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