Could you please check and evaluate my letter writing IELTS Writing Task 1? Thanks.

QuestionsCategory: LetterCould you please check and evaluate my letter writing IELTS Writing Task 1? Thanks.
Ragini asked 4 months ago

Dear xyz,
Just writing to let you know that i was exhilrated on receiving the gift from you on my birthday. Thank you so much!
you won’t believe that I wanted a laptop from eons age. 
Coincidentally, you have gifted me the same model i was looking for. Anyways let me tell you why i like it so much.I was quite impressed the way it is designed sleek and light weight,that makes it extremely convenient and comfortable to carry it to far-flung places.Furthermore, this gadget is technologically advanced with features like expandible memory, latest software, sound and picture clarity.
As you already know that i have enrolled for management course, so it goes without saying how useful your gift is for me.The laptop will be of immense help during preparation of projects, surfing the net and storing the course content. In addition to this, I will use it to listen music, watch movies or play games in my leisure time.I must say this is one of the best gifts i have received on my special day.
hope to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Abc
 
 

Could you please check and evaluate my letter writing IELTS Writing Task 1? Thanks.
5 (100%) 1 vote

Ragini replied 4 months ago

i forgot to edit it.. i know about capitalising the letters kindly ignore those errors