Could you please asses my General writing task 1? Thank you!

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 1Could you please asses my General writing task 1? Thank you!
Samar asked 2 years ago

Q: Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat
Write a letter to them to: explain the reason of noise, apologize, & describe what action you will take.
Ans:
Dear Sara,
    Greetings! I hope that you and your family are keeping well and that everything is okay with you. I am writing to apologize about the inconvenience that I caused to you last Friday. I am so very sorry about that; in fact, it was an unusual event: we were having a party…
    It just came out of the blue, I wasn’t planning for organizing such a party & inviting that big crowd of people. However, my husband and my friends had been planning for making a surprise party for me. They brought their sound system, which was producing most of the noise. Furthermore, many of my kids’ friends attended, so I could not help preventing them from running, playing & screaming loudly.
    I am repeating my apology and I promise that I am going to take care so as not to make you upset again. I have warned my kids to consider which kinds of games to play at home in order not to bother anyone in the neighborhood. Also, in case we have any special events, I am going to try as much as I can to make the celebrations outdoors.
Yours sincerely,
Shery.
 
 

Could you please asses my General writing task 1? Thank you!
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