Could you check my essay. Thank you, :)

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 2Could you check my essay. Thank you, :)
Einar Hallik asked 4 years ago

TOPIC : Scientist agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
ESSAY: 
Researches of professors of nutrition show us there is no doubt in harmful influence of unhealthy food to organism. According to some people, education might solve a problem which appears together with abuse of junk food. From my standpoint, people can be helped only if they are looking for it, the reason for this is nobody refuses from habits without desire.
One the one hand, awareness of people might be useful to prevent humanity from increasing quantity of diseases which are the reasons of the wrong nutrition. Furthermore, there is no a certain assurance that all people, especially young generation, can separate good and bad food. For instance, I was sure that fried food absolutely have not any injurious components. Therefore, differences between heathy and unhealthy food have to be explained for everyone.
However, significant part of people do not observe the necessity to explain people proper nutrition. This point of view has own causes to exist. Firstly, the junk food is more delicious and easier to cook. More over, a lot of families would rather buy more unhealthy food in spite of horrible things which might be caused due to the fact that food is cheaper. Besides, it is known that smoking is a big problem for mankind. Not to mention the fact,  all schools attempting to protect the kids show them all aspects of smoking, but it does not work if someone decided for himself smoking plays important part in his life. Consequently, person will not refuse to eat what he wants and does not want to be educated.
To sum it up, there is no exact answer to this statement. Different people have various meanings. I opt for it is no use educating people.

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