Could you assess my task? I really appreciate,I have the exam very soon and i dont know which bands could i get

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 2Could you assess my task? I really appreciate,I have the exam very soon and i dont know which bands could i get
Dario asked 3 years ago

Topic: Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?
Give reasons for your answer.
 
Freedom has been considered a pillar of human society, however someone argues  whether a society to be considered totally free needs to develop an equal system to exchange ideas through no boundaries in speaking.
 
It is hard to define the concept of freedom,however in recent years it has linked with speaking without any sort of limits ,especially political ones. Despite this consideration,some people believe that a society can not be defined free by chosing only this parametre. Indeed, law system is generally considered as most important in modern countries. Laws and regulations could be provide a proper defence of personal civil rights,without considering freerly speaking. For instance, westerns nations look at Turkey as one of the most liberal country in Asia. However tanking into consideration Turkey, despite a strong system of laws,speaking against the government could lead to dangerous consequences.
As far as I am concerned, exchanging and sharing ideas freerly is the first in considering a state peaceful and developed. By putting limits to what citizens could said,the idea of peace and free could be endangered.Looking back to the past , it is obvious that without using this approach the society would be different. Greek empire is considered one of the most liberal empire througout the history. Greeks put basis to develop a first form of democracy, by sharing ideas in public place,generally squares. Sharing differenti ideas could be used as a form of cultural enrichment,in terms of changing what is getting wrong and ,more important, as a means of compliant by citizens.Thus,harming free speech is a direct attack to society.
 
Having looked at the facts that putting limits in sharing thoughts is extremely dangerous,in terms of democratic system,I personally believe that speaking freerly is the first step in developing a better society.

1 Answers
Rachel Evans answered 3 years ago

Freedom has been considered a pillar of human society, however someone argues whether a society to be considered totally free needs to develop an equal system to exchange ideas through no boundaries in speaking. (main ideas?)
 
It is hard to define the concept of freedom (of speech), however in recent years it has linked with speaking without any sort of limits, especially political ones. Despite this consideration, some people believe that a society cannot be defined define free by choosing only this parameter. Indeed, law system is generally considered as most important in modern countries. (lack of coherence) Laws and regulations could be provide a proper defence of personal civil rights (word choice), without considering freerly speaking. (not clear) For instance, westerns nations look at see/ Turkey as one of the most liberal country in Asia. However tanking taking Turkey into consideration, despite a strong system of laws, speaking against the government could lead to dangerous consequences. (connection?!)
As far as I am concerned, exchanging and sharing ideas freerly (typo) is the first (first what?) in considering a state peaceful and developed. By putting limits to what citizens could said say, the idea of peace and free could be endangered. Looking back to the past, it is obvious that without using this approach the society would be different. Greek empire is considered one of the most liberal empires throughout the history. Greeks put basis to develop a first form of democracy, by sharing ideas in public place, generally squares. Sharing different ideas could be used as a form of cultural enrichment, in terms of changing what is getting wrong and, more important, as a means of compliant by citizens. Thus, harming free speech is a direct attack to society.
Having looked at the facts that putting limits in sharing thoughts is extremely dangerous, in terms of democratic system, I personally believe that speaking freerly is the first step in developing a better society.
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