Children should begin learning foreign language as soon as they start school

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jasmine asked 4 months ago

please read my essay and what band i could get. Topic: Children should begin learning foreign language as soon as they start school. Do you agree or disagree

Language is the best means of communication. In the modern globalization knowledge of limited language isn’t enough to communicate with outside the world. I strongly believe that children should encouraged to commence of gaining the knowledge of foreign language as soon as they start the school.In the following paragraph i will list some reasons to support my arguments.
To begin with, if one wants to outcome soon, one must start sooner. For example, the early children begin to learn language the better will be result. Moreover, scientists have been proved that child doesn’t affect by learning language but helped them to learned effectively. As a result ,they faster become familiar with strange language and improve their hearing ability.
Secondly, kids are out of fear in learning which support them to gain knowledge of foreign language. For instance, adults are often afraid to make mistakes when they in new language whereas children don’t afraid of making grammatical mistakes.  Further more they get chances to practice freely and get rid of accent. Hence fear which is greatest barriers for persons on speaking without doubtly can be minimize and enhance to learn for child eagerly.
On the other hand, some people believe that efforts of learning of foreign language for children can be utilize to gain specific knowledge of own language is advantageous. It is considered duality language problem can be seen.
To sum up , i think that it is very essential for children to begin learning the new language in their early ages. It is outweighed the disadvantages by advantages such as quickly learning and great pronunciation.Also ,it helps a child develop and gain more knowledge which is good for long run.

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jasmine answered 4 months ago

Language is the best means of communication. In the modern globalization knowledge of limited language is notenough to communicate with the outside world. I strongly believe that children should be encouraged to commence of gaining the knowledge of foreign language as soon as they start the school. In the following paragraph i will list some reasons to support my arguments.
To begin with, if one wants to outcome soon, one must start sooner. For example, the earlier children begin to learn language, the better  the result will be. Moreover, scientists have proved that children are not affected by learning language but helped them to learn effectively.[1]  As a result,they become familiar with strange language and improve their listening ability.
Secondly, kids are out of fear in learning which support them to gain knowledge of foreign language. [2] For instance, adults are often afraid to make mistakes when they in new language whereas children are not afraid of making grammatical mistakes. Furthermore they [3] get chances to practice freely and get rid of accent. Hence fear, which is greatest barrier for persons on speaking without doubt can be minimized and enhanced to learn for child eagerly.
On the other hand, some people believe that efforts of learning of foreign language for children can be utilized to gain specific knowledge of own language is advantageous. [4] It is considered duality language problem can be seen.
To sum up, I think that it is very essential for children to begin learning new language in their early ages. It is outweighed the disadvantages by advantages such as quickly learning and great pronunciation. Also,it helps a child develop and gain more knowledge which is good for long run.

 [1] [4] the meaning is not clear at all
 [2]Not clear at all
 [3]who are ‘they’? 

Task achievement – 4.0 
– Responds the task in a minimum way
– Presents some main ideas but these are difficult to identify and not well supported
Coherence and Cohesion – 4.0
– Ideas and information are not arranged coherently and no clear progression in the response
Lexical Resource – 3.0
– Uses only a very limited range of words and expressions with very limited control of word formation
Grammatical Range and Accuracy – 3.5
– Uses only a very limited range of structures
– Some structures are correct but errors predominate, and punctuation is often faulty

Overall – 3.5

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jasmine answered 4 months ago

I will give it a 4. Lot of mistakes and meaning is not very clear

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