children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 2children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
priya505 asked 11 months ago

Now-a-days, the responsibilities of children have declined rapidly compared to the children in long back. Few people think this as an appreciable approach,while others do not. In my opinion, i strongly feel that children should be more responsible from their earlier ages.
 
Firstly, in the world there have been cutthroat competitions in all aspects and if children take responsibilities from their early stages, that would lead them to a strengthened person when they become an adult. In a competitive world,if a child is grown up with more responsibility, they can also be very desciplined.
 
Secondly, if children are indulged with more responsibilities, their concentrations to other filthy activities would decreases and even crime rates of country can also be reduced. This could also lead country in many betterment.
 
Finally, a highly responsible children will become more organised and will become well planned for later assignments. As they have overcome many hurdles in younger stage, they will not be much overwhelmed in future miseries.
 
To conclude, irrespective of people thinking that children should make less responsible, i condemn them and i highly support that child should give and make them feel responsible.

children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
5 (100%) 3 votes

3 Answers
Rachel Evans answered 11 months ago

Now-a-days, the responsibilities of children have declined rapidly compared to those of the children in long back (cuz here you are comparing the responsibility). Few people think this as an appreciable approach, while others do not. In my opinion, I strongly feel that children should be more responsible from their earlier ages.

Firstly, in the world there have been cutthroat competitions in all aspects and if children take responsibilities from their early stages, that would lead them to a they can be strengthened stronger person when they become an adult. In a competitive world, if a child is grown up with more responsibility, they can also be very desciplined disciplined.

Secondly, if children are indulged with more responsibilities, their concentrations to other filthy activities would will decreases and even crime rates of that country can also be reduced. This could also lead the country in many much betterment.

Finally, a highly responsible children child will become more organised and will become well planned for later assignments. As they have overcome many hurdles in younger stage, they will not be much overwhelmed in future miseries.

To conclude, irrespective of people thinking that children should make less responsible, I condemn them and I highly support that child should give and make them feel responsible.
TA – 5.5

  • Underword (minimum 250)

CC – 5.0

  • not clear overall progression

LR – 5.5

  • attempt to use less common words
  • errors in word choice and spelling
  • use a limited range of vocab

GRA – 5.5

  • use a limited range of structures

Overall 5.5

children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
5 (100%) 3 votes

Thuy Dung Pham answered 11 months ago

Now-a-days  Nowadays, the responsibilities of children have declined rapidly compared to the children in long back. Few people think this is as an appreciable approach,while others do not. In my opinion, i  I strongly feel that children should be more responsible from their earlier ages.
 
Firstly, in the world reality, there have been cutthroat competitions in all aspects and . if If children take responsibilities from their early stages, that would lead them to be a strengthened person when they become an adult. In a competitive world, if a child is grown up with more responsibility, they can also be very desciplined.
 
Secondly, if children are indulged with more responsibilities, their concentrations to other filthy activities would decreases decrease and even crime rates of that country can also be reduced. This could also lead country in many betterment.
 
Finally, a highly responsible children will become more organised and will become well planned for later assignments. As they have overcome many hurdles in younger stage, they will not be much overwhelmed in future miseries.
 
To conclude, irrespective of people thinking that children should make less responsible, i condemn them and i highly support that child should give and make them feel responsible.
Task achievement: 4.5 (responds to the task only in a minimal way, presents some main ideas but these are difficult to identify and may be repetitive, irrelevant or not well supported)
Coherence and Cohesion: 4.5 (presents information and ideas but these are not arranged coherently and there is no clear progression in the response)
Lexical Resource: 5.0 (uses only basic vocabulary which may be used repetitively or which may be inappropriate for the task)
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 4.0 (uses only a very limited range of structures with only rare use of  subordinate clauses, some structures are accurate but errors predominate, and punctuation is often faulty)
Overall: 4.5 (You have ideas but you did not know how to express the ideas in a proper way. The only way you can improve your writing is developing your reading skills. From that, you can learn how they express their ideas and how they use less common vocabulary)

children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
5 (100%) 3 votes

sajeemaka answered 8 months ago

Here is my answer on the above task. Can any one please comment on my writing?
In many parts of the world, children are now less responsible than the children in the past. Some of them consider these changes positive, while for others it is a negative change. In my opinion, I believe that these changes are effecting our children negatively.
Many parents treat their children at the age of 18 as independent person to make decisions and also provide everything demanded by their children, regardless of their needs. Because of these reasons they become more self oriented and they are not ready to take the other responsibility, as they give priority to themselves. Moreover, parents nowadays are busy with work and most of the families are nuclear oriented, due to that reason, children are not getting the chance to be with the families, whereas most of the time they are staying by themselves engaged in their own world of technology, which keeps them more isolated. Hence people are very less concerned about others and their surroundings or even about the society and they are not ready to take any task in their life and become very stressful when they face any simple difficulties.
In the past people from the younger ages to older age they are more strong mentally and physically as they are were grown in such environment. In other words, people were grown in a joint family system, there were large number of people in the house and the elder one should take care of the younger children in every way. Hence they are very much concerned about the family members and each of them are responsible to others. Moreover, they should work hard from the young ages to support their families, which helped the older generation to be more responsible.
However, now there are many other parts of the world, where they start practicing their children to be more responsible to others and to the society. For example, In China , from the school itself the students have to clean their classrooms, washrooms and the school surroundings. Furthermore, in Canada, they are giving more priority to volunteer work , in order to get placed in any course or work. Thus, the people are very keen to help others and to be supportive and caring person. These practice make each child to have more positive outlook on others.
To conclude, I firmly believe that the people are less responsible compared to the past generation are mainly due to their living environment. Obviously, these changing attitude of the new parents effect negatively to the children, they will be more scared to take the responsibility and will be less courageous to take the task or to face any problem in their life.

children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
5 (100%) 3 votes

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