children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion

QuestionsCategory: Writing Task 2children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
priya505 asked 3 weeks ago

Now-a-days, the responsibilities of children have declined rapidly compared to the children in long back. Few people think this as an appreciable approach,while others do not. In my opinion, i strongly feel that children should be more responsible from their earlier ages.
 
Firstly, in the world there have been cutthroat competitions in all aspects and if children take responsibilities from their early stages, that would lead them to a strengthened person when they become an adult. In a competitive world,if a child is grown up with more responsibility, they can also be very desciplined.
 
Secondly, if children are indulged with more responsibilities, their concentrations to other filthy activities would decreases and even crime rates of country can also be reduced. This could also lead country in many betterment.
 
Finally, a highly responsible children will become more organised and will become well planned for later assignments. As they have overcome many hurdles in younger stage, they will not be much overwhelmed in future miseries.
 
To conclude, irrespective of people thinking that children should make less responsible, i condemn them and i highly support that child should give and make them feel responsible.

children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
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2 Answers
Rachel answered 2 days ago

Now-a-days, the responsibilities of children have declined rapidly compared to those of the children in long back (cuz here you are comparing the responsibility). Few people think this as an appreciable approach, while others do not. In my opinion, I strongly feel that children should be more responsible from their earlier ages.

Firstly, in the world there have been cutthroat competitions in all aspects and if children take responsibilities from their early stages, that would lead them to a they can be strengthened stronger person when they become an adult. In a competitive world, if a child is grown up with more responsibility, they can also be very desciplined disciplined.

Secondly, if children are indulged with more responsibilities, their concentrations to other filthy activities would will decreases and even crime rates of that country can also be reduced. This could also lead the country in many much betterment.

Finally, a highly responsible children child will become more organised and will become well planned for later assignments. As they have overcome many hurdles in younger stage, they will not be much overwhelmed in future miseries.

To conclude, irrespective of people thinking that children should make less responsible, I condemn them and I highly support that child should give and make them feel responsible.
TA – 5.5

  • Underword (minimum 250)

CC – 5.0

  • arrange information coherently

LR – 5.5

  • attempt to use less common words
  • errors in word choice and spelling
  • use a limited range of vocab

GRA – 5.5

  • use a limited range of structures

Overall 5.5

children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
5 (100%) 3 votes

Thuy Dung Pham answered 2 days ago

Now-a-days  Nowadays, the responsibilities of children have declined rapidly compared to the children in long back. Few people think this is as an appreciable approach,while others do not. In my opinion, i  I strongly feel that children should be more responsible from their earlier ages.
 
Firstly, in the world reality, there have been cutthroat competitions in all aspects and . if If children take responsibilities from their early stages, that would lead them to be a strengthened person when they become an adult. In a competitive world, if a child is grown up with more responsibility, they can also be very desciplined.
 
Secondly, if children are indulged with more responsibilities, their concentrations to other filthy activities would decreases decrease and even crime rates of that country can also be reduced. This could also lead country in many betterment.
 
Finally, a highly responsible children will become more organised and will become well planned for later assignments. As they have overcome many hurdles in younger stage, they will not be much overwhelmed in future miseries.
 
To conclude, irrespective of people thinking that children should make less responsible, i condemn them and i highly support that child should give and make them feel responsible.
Task achievement: 4.5 (responds to the task only in a minimal way, presents some main ideas but these are difficult to identify and may be repetitive, irrelevant or not well supported)
Coherence and Cohesion: 4.5 (presents information and ideas but these are not arranged coherently and there is no clear progression in the response)
Lexical Resource: 5.0 (uses only basic vocabulary which may be used repetitively or which may be inappropriate for the task)
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 4.0 (uses only a very limited range of structures with only rare use of  subordinate clauses, some structures are accurate but errors predominate, and punctuation is often faulty)
Overall: 4.5 (You have ideas but you did not know how to express the ideas in a proper way. The only way you can improve your writing is developing your reading skills. From that, you can learn how they express their ideas and how they use less common vocabulary)

children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
5 (100%) 3 votes