I was directed here by my friends. Could please check my essay and score? Thank you!

QuestionsCategory: DicussionI was directed here by my friends. Could please check my essay and score? Thank you!
dosgortol asked 2 months ago

With a growing population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that Gm foods offer a viable  solution to this problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
 The rapid growth of human population has rendered food consumption is one of the main concerns of societies. Consequently, some people contended that Gm foods would be best solution for the extreme demans which I strongly reject.
 Chemical supplements which are used to increased the amount of annual harvest are perfectly known to be harmful. Additionaly, they are also believed to have some negative effects on food’s nutrient values. I therefore believe, in such a situation, human beings would cheat themselves, by eating just the appearance of foods without taking any protein or vitamin. Furthermore, these supplements were also scientifically proved to be responsible for the creation of some lethal insects, which are immunized to pesticides and also extremely harmful for ecology and natural structure of foods.
 Additionally, it would heavily cost to the human health. As a result of modification of foods, I believe, new diseases would emerge, existing ones would be stronger or branch. Obesity is by far the most significant example of this, which we still do not know how to effectively fight against. Morever, it also would have a great range of detrimental effects on earth and its ecology. For example, lethal insects that can be reproduced by modification process could eradicate the necessary ones for the germination period of plants.
 İn conclusion, I definitely believe that Gm foods would have extremely harfmul effects on both environment and people, due to its chemically changed content, which can create immunized insects to pesticides and new illnesses which can be a great menace for humanity.

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