Could you please check and evluate my essay for IELTS Writing Task 1? Thank you in advance.

QuestionsCategory: Line ChartCould you please check and evluate my essay for IELTS Writing Task 1? Thank you in advance.
Shamil asked 3 months ago

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
The data shows information about clients of Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014. A Number of books read by men grew up in this period. A Number of books read by women also went up, however, it went down in 2014.
Men read near 3000 books in 2011. This number slowly grew up to 4000 books in 2012. After that, a number of books rapidly went up to 14000 in 2014.
Women read more than men in 2011. A number of books also constantly rose from 5000 to 10000 in two years period. A number of books read by men and women were equal in 2013. They read 10000 books. But in 2014 women read less than men. This number less for 6000 books and near the 8000 books.
Burnaby Public Library was a very popular place of the city in 2014. A total number of books read by men and women was 22000 books in one year.

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